Amazing stuff. I love how striking each of the character designs are. The fighting towards the end was genuinely brutal. Some of the action isn't super clear but man this still hits.
i don't understand what people mean by "messy in the middle" or "a bit hard to follow at times" dreaming into waking, dreams into day dreams, daydreams into a sad horrifying reality. the ink sytle feelsd open and airy :)
marvelous stuff... very beautiful illustrations all throughout. the choice to go completely wordless made it a bit hard to follow at times, but I think it sold the messy emotional narrative in a way where words would've fallen just short. I get the feeling I'll be giving it a reread every once in a while - satisfies a particular mood-craving of the heart. lovely work overall
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Amazing stuff. I love how striking each of the character designs are. The fighting towards the end was genuinely brutal. Some of the action isn't super clear but man this still hits.
i don't understand what people mean by "messy in the middle" or "a bit hard to follow at times" dreaming into waking, dreams into day dreams, daydreams into a sad horrifying reality. the ink sytle feelsd open and airy :)
marvelous stuff... very beautiful illustrations all throughout. the choice to go completely wordless made it a bit hard to follow at times, but I think it sold the messy emotional narrative in a way where words would've fallen just short. I get the feeling I'll be giving it a reread every once in a while - satisfies a particular mood-craving of the heart. lovely work overall
ouuu I cried I like it I love it I lived it
Found it a challenging read through the middle,the alt text on bsky definitely helped. I did enjoy it though.
great stuff Splendidland. The art in this is amazing.The narrative gets a little messy in the middle, but this should be published.
absolutely beautiful